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juz another love story!
02-08-2006, 09:51 PM
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02-08-2006, 10:48 PM
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02-09-2006, 12:13 AM
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after ng duty ni shine..nagkita sila ni mai na isang coffee shop.

shine: alam mo ba mai..naka confine ung dad ni mike sa hospital na pinagtatrabahuhan coh..
mai: o talaga?! havent heard anything from him since we passed d senior exam ah! anu,gwapo pa rin ba?!
shine: laki nga ng pinag bago nia eh,sobrang formal. pero infairness to him naman..uMmMMm..let'S say he's stil cute!
mai: huwaw naMan!! dont tell me..u're stil madly inlove wit him..
shine: duh?! anu ka ba! mga bata pa tau nun! teka nga..change topic tau! mamaya madapa pa un eh!
mai: nga naman! o,kamusta na kau ni cielo?
shine: ayun,dis past few days..medyo busy sia..bukas punta daw sia sa hongkong eh..magbubukas daw ng branch ung hotel nila dun!
mai: ganun ba..hMmMMm..baka naman may iba nang baabe un ha! sabihin mo sa kin pag sinaktan ka nun,ako sasapak dun!
then,tamang tama ng beep ang fone ni shine..
"walang name..sinu kaya toh.."

"i got ur # from 1 of ur friends na nurse din. by the way,its myK! cud we meet now? sabi kase ng head nurse mo,off duty ka na daw.."

shine: shit!
mai: o bakt?!
shine: si mike,nag txt! nagyayayang magkita daw kami ngaun..
mai: papuntahin mo d2,para maka balita naman tau..(grabbed shine'S cp) acoh na nga mag tetext.

"sure..and2 acoh sa cafe havana sa gateway..punta ka na lang d2."

mai: yan na ( returning her fone)
shine: anu sabi mo?
mai: basahin mo na lang kaya sa sent items mo!
after a few minutes dumating si mike!
nakita nia agad ung pwesto nila shine. went to them and sit..

mai: mike,kamusta ka na! buti nabuhay kang mulI!
mike: uu naman! ikaw,san ka nagtatrabaho?
mai: d pa acoh graduate eh,shift acoh ng shift.pero ngaun im taking masscom.ikaw?
mike: nice! ito,taga pamahala ng family bussiness namin..hassle nga eh. shine,bkit tahimik ka? ( looked at shine)
shine: a..aa..wala namn.
nag beep ung fone ni mai..
"save by the bell" *shine sighed*

mai: oo nga pala..may pasok pa acoh! see u guys next tym aright!
shine: ha?! aalis ka na agad? mamaya na!
mai: may pasok pa ako noh! d kana bata para bantayan ka! tska andyan naman si mike eh! mike,bantayan mo yang kaibigan coh ha! hatid mo pauwi! kung hindi uupakan kita! cge! una na acoh!
mike: sure! ingat ka!
shine: ingat ka! txt mo na lang acoh pag dissmissal nio na!
then mai left the 2 of them. silence came across..

mike: kamusta na si cielo? kau pa ba?
shine: huh?! a.....oo! bukas pupunta sia ng hong kong eh..magtatayo kase ng branch ung hotel nila dun.
mike: i see! ikaw,kamusta ka na..
shine: ito,ok lang! ikaw? (blushed)
mike: ok lang rin..ur stil the shiennon i've known..laging nag bublush.
shine: ( turned very red ) tnx.
*tahimik*

mike hold her hand..
mike: jus be urself ok. d naman kita kakainin eh. behind dis clothes..im stil the mike u know..
shine: hindi halata..kase dati ur just wearing our skul uniform tpos ngaun naka amerikana ka na..hehehe
mike: hehehe! pero ganun pa rin acoh. makulit..kaya nga nakuha ko number mo sa co-nurse mo eh! kinulit ko sia ng sobra.
shine: buti d ka na kaltukan nun. hehehehe!
mike: im so glad i've made u smile.. lage ka kasi naka simangot kaya napagkakamalan kang suplada..
shine: ganun ba un! hehehe..ikaw,may gurlfriend ka na ba? kau ba ni lucille?
mke: hindi noh. tinigilan coh pang liligaw coh sa knya..kase..
shine: kase..
mike: kase nag focused acoh sa senior'S exam..grabeh sobrang hirap.(sipped at his drink)
shine: uu nga eh..halos nanginginig aco nung kumukuha acoh ng exam.halos maihi nga acoh sa kaba..pero ayun nakapasa rin
mike: hahaha. buti kamo d ka naihi! hahaha! u know wat,u've brighten up my day..sobrang hassle sa work eh. pinatawa mo acoh ngaun!
napatitig si shine kay mike..
"those eyes,ung mysteryosong napakalalim..those red lips that once kissed me..i think im falling for this man again.."
"snap"
mike: it'S 6.34 pm para mag daydream!
shine: huh..a oo! teka,d acoh nag deday dream noH! may naalala lang aq..(looked at her watch) damn! almost 7 na pala..uwi na acoh..may gagawin pa acoh sa bahay eh.
mike: ganun ba! hatid na kita..
shine: ah..wag na. im fyn.. kaya ko naman umuwi eh..
mike: hindi. baka kaltukan aq ni mai noh..i promised her to bring you safely at home..
shine: no really im fyn.. as if naman sasabihin coh dun na d mo coh hinatid noh!
mike: nop..i dont break a promis remember..
pulled shine papuntang kotse..
inside the car..nagpatugtog si mike..
"oh my GOD! weak! version pa ng SWV.." naisip ni shine.. ( as we all have known,music lover si shine)

mike: masyadong bang oa ung music..want me to change it..
shine: no,its ok..i love it! ( d nagbago si mike..he'S stil the mike na laging concious jus 2 make me feel comfortable)
mike: really?! i loved that song din..kase i dedicate that to the most important gurl in my life..ung pinka una kong minahal na babae
shine: ah....she'S very lucky! so where is she? bakit d mo paksalan..total stable ka na naman..(huh?! kaya pala nireject na acoh that tym..)
mike: un na nga eh..d coh masabi sa knya ung nararmdaman coh..i wish an angel wud fall down to help me...
shine: i cud help u..
mike: really?! u wud?!
shine: sure! total lapit na mag valentines..letS plan this out very well.. surprise dinner mo sia..wit candlight,red wine..o dba!
mike:sweet mo pala maging lalake..
shine: sapak?! ikaw na nga tinutulungan! nang asar ka pa! dyan na bahay coh!
mike stopped sa harap ng bahay ni shine.baba na sana si shine pero hinawakan sia ni mike..
shine: o bkit!
mike: smile muna..hehehe! ikaw naman masyado ka na namang mataray!basta tutulungan mo coh ha!
shine: kakapikon ka kase eh! mapang asar masyado! ok! cge gud nyt na!
mike: ok! see u tomorrow..
shine: anung tomorrow..may duty acoh noh!
mike: kaya nga! sa hospital! (then mike gave her a peck on her cheeks!)..gud nyt!
shine: *blushed* gud nyt!( then hurriedly get out of the car and went inside thier gate)
she leaned on the gate,touch her cheeks..
"gosh! he kissed me! ang soft pa rin ng lips nia.."

wyl mike inside the car..
" galit kaya sia?! im really ready for her this tym..!"

that nyt..nag tetext si cielo and shine.

"how did ur day went baby? sorry i was kinda busy eh..u know naman paalis na acoh bukas and i wud be in hong kong for the whole feb.i miss u."
"it was fyn..baby take care of urself ok! love u! nyt nyt"

nag ring ang fone nia..agad nia sinagot
she thought it was cielo kaya d nia na tinignan ung number..

shine: baby,im fyn..
mike: ahm...shine?!
shine: mike?!! im sorry i thought it was...
mike: no..it'S ok.. im sorry kung nakaka abala acoh. jus want to ask kung galit ka..
shine: galit saan?
mike: kiss..
tahimik
" oh my..i duno wat to say!"
mike: shine?! stil there? hello!
shine: a..yea!
mike: so ur mad?
shine: i mean hindi..t shud i? it was just a friendly kiss namn dba?
tahimik
shine: mike,i need to go to bed na..aga pa duty coh eh! tnx for the call..nyt!
mike: no problem..basta ikaw..nyt!

after that pressuring call..both of them sighed..

"he loves another woman..pero he kissed me..flirting?! hmMmmM...mga lalake talaga naku! sa akin pa tumawag hindi dun sa babae nia! hmp!!"

wyl..

"im pretty sure..she have no id bout all this..but i really cant help my self..im madly inlove with her.."

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02-09-2006, 12:35 PM
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02-09-2006, 02:35 PM
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02-09-2006, 06:41 PM
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02-09-2006, 09:04 PM
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02-09-2006, 09:42 PM
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the next day at work..
before mag punta si shine sa rum 212,she arranged her uniform very neatly and carefully..she untied her hair..then went out of their locker rums..

cielo: suprise baby! gud morning! *kissed her*
nanlaki ang mga mata ni shine..
shine:*pushed him softly* g-g-gud morning baby! a-anung ginagawa mo d2..dba pupunta ka ng hong kong..
cielo: arent you happy im here?! well,i wanna see my baby before i go..
shine: baby,duty coh na kase eh..im sorry..im gonna miss you..
cielo: d na rin aq magtatagal..i'LL leave in 2 hours..
them mike came..
cielo: is that mike?
shine: oo,naconfine ung dad nia d2 eh..kaya ayun..
cielo: mike pare!
napalingon si mike then approached them..
mike: cielo?! o pare,kamusta?
cielo: ito..manager ng isang hotel. papunta na nga acoh ng hong kong eh..mag oopen kase ung branch namin dun..sinilip coh lang ung baby coh ( then hold shine at her hips).ikaw?
mike: (napatingin si mike kay shine na napa yuko na lang) wala,pinagpapatuloy ung family bussiness namin..cge pare,i have to go! punta muna acoh kay daddy!
cielo: cge pare! pag uwi coh..gimik tau minsan.
mike: cge pare!
pumasok si mike sa kwarto ng dad nia..
cielo: o bkit tahimik ka baby? is there sumthing wrong?
shine: a...wala naman! baby,i nid to go na..kase duty ko na eh.
cielo: ok baby! (hugged her tyt then kissed her) ill miss you! and dont forget..i love you so much!
shine: i love you too..

then shine walked away..umalis na rin agad si cielo..pumasok na si shine sa rum 212 and..

mike: baby..este shine..hehehe! i know dis gud restaurant..dun na lang tau pa reserve ng dinner..para sa feb 14..
shine: sapak! baby ka dyan! ewan coh sau! bahala ka sa buhay mo! tska bakit d ka magpatulong sa mga secretary mo!
mike: uy! galit sia..ayaw mo ng baby! anu kaya gusto nia..hmMmm..honey?!
shine: tigilan mo nga acoh mike!*blushing*
mike: oi nag bublush na sia..ge na nga..oi anu na! d ka pwed umatras dun noh! remember u promised!
shine:hmP! ewan coh sau! tska duty acoh sir! d acoh pwed makipag chikahan!
mike: ganun ba..so meaning nun lalabas ulit tau mamaya..hehehe. san naman tau magkikita?
shine: kapal ng muka mo talaga kahit kelan! alis na nga acoh!
mike:hehehe..jus kidding..toh naman..( hinila nia si shine na palakad na sana palabas..then napakandong sa knya)
silence
shine: anu ba!! (blushed very hard)
mike: a--a--im  sorry! d coh sinasadya! ur so cute pa rin talaga wen u blushed..
shine: ewan coh sau! (then she went out of the rum)

after ng duty ni shine..may naka park na kotse sa harapang ng gate ng hospital..

shine: mukang kotse ni mike yan ha.
then..the window opened..
mike: shine,sabay ka na!
shine: anu ka?! may pamasahe namana coh noh! tska bakit acoh sasakay sa kotse mo? baka mamaya eh..kung anung gawin mo sa akiN!
mike: hahahaha! nagpapatawa ka ba! sana kagabi coh pa ginawa!
shine: kahit na noh! ah basta!
mike: ok,im sorry na..plzz come into my car na..illegal parking d2..
shine: problema mo na yan..
mike: plzzzzzz shine..
napa isip si shine sandali and she rode..
mike: kala ko ayaw mo talaga eh..
shine:hmP! ewan! puntahan nating ung restaurant na sabi mo..
mike: ok,tpos after nun kain tau ha!
shine: ok! u owe me one mr. mike delgado!
mike: hehehe!

they went to the restaurant..it was a resort na open view..kitang kta ung wen the sun sets..
mike: ok ba?!
shine: a..uu ok na ok! "*sighed* swerte naman ng babae na un"
mike: do u think she'll like it here..
shine: uu naman! naku pag d ka pa sinagot nun tell me..iuuntog coh sa pader ng magising! hahaha!
mike: wag naman..mahal ko un!
shine: ah mahal mo ba!
mike: uu sobra..lika na nga kain na tau!
shine: saan tau kakain..
mike: basta..

dinala sia ni mike sa isang expensive and luxurious restau..
shine: mahal naman ata d2 mike..dapat ung mga dinadala mo d2 mga naka gown na babae..
mike: so bibili pa kita ng gown bago tau kumain..mas gusto pa nga kita kase ur simple eh..
shine:*blushed* ashewzzzz!
mike: ganda mo talaga pag nag bublush ka..lika na..
shine: ok!

then they ate and had a gud tym..then hinatid sia ni mike pauwi..inside the car..
shine: tnx mike..i did had a great tym!
mike: sure! so bukas uliT!
shine: waaaaahh! ano ka! araw araw na taung lumalabas!
mike: 2 araw pa nga lang eh! tska sa hospital magkikita tau uli!
shine: uu nga pala! o cge gud nyt!
mike: gud nyt..

then she get out of the car..

the next day..sa hospital..xcited si shine..pero pag pasok nia ng rum 212 eh wala si mike.

"huh! milagro..wala sia d2..pero bakit kaya?! anu kayang nangyari dun"
whole day pabalik balik si shine sa rum pero wala talaga si mike..
off duty nia na and habang nagbibihis sia napansin nia ung cellphone nia..

"shine,sorry..busy kase d2 sa office eh kaya d na acoh makadalaw dyan!2 days na lang and valentines na..see u on valentines na lang kase kailngan sa day na un clear ang sched coh kaya tatapusin coh na lahat ng chores d2 sa office! teyk keyr anyway! i miss honey"

"honey daw?! anu na naman kaya ung takbo ng utak ng lalaking un! hmp! bahala nga sia! at tska bakit ba nag rereport sia sa akin..d dun sa babae nia!"

2 days after..valentines na........

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02-10-2006, 01:23 AM
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newbie lng poh meh pro nbsas koh story moh. Lufet ng story moh p2loy poh plz. Zzb Zzb

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02-10-2006, 02:36 PM
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wat happen na??? 2 days nalang valentine na...i cant wait to read the contintion......  ASTIG tlga!!!  Zzc

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