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-- My Love Story..--
10-05-2009, 10:22 PM (This post was last modified: 10-06-2009 04:06 AM by heartyou.)
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Exclamation -- My Love Story..--
Hey guys, I'm going to write this love story.
It's my first story and i hope you'll like it. Hope lang na basahin nio and post some comments if you want Smile


Here's the characters:
Main characters
JANiNE: A 16 years old girl, she easily gets hurt, she wants to find the right one for her. Maganda sya, but she's insecure about herself.
JOSH: An 18 years old guy, she's searching for the right one, he always changes his mind.
JAY: 16 years old guy, strong and patient in love. Good looking guy.
JENNY: 17 years old girl, mejo maarte and she always wants to be at the center of everything.

Other characters:
SHAN & JOY: 16 and 17 years old, close friends ni JANiNE.. They're always together and they always share secrets.
MARK & MATT: both 17 years old, mejo may pagkaplayboy but they are funny. Magkapatid sila.
SHiNEY: 15 years old girl.
PAUL: 17 years old guy.
PART 1

Italy, first day of school..
JANiNE'S HOUSE:

6am.

Grabe, I'm so late na! Layo pa ng school ko.. Call ko nga sina Shan! Gising na naman cguro mga yun.

SHAN'S HOUSE:

phone ringing.

Shan: (Aga naman tumawag nito! sino ba to!?)

Shan: Hello?!
Janine: Shan, pwede nio ba akong daanan ni tita? malalate nanaman ako ehhh!
Shan: Kagigising ko nga lang eh!
Janine: Anu?! Nakipagdate ka nanaman kagabe no?
Shan: Aha! Kwento ko sayo mamaya! Maliligo pa ako.
Janine: Wag ka ng maligo! Ndi parin naman matatanggal amoy mu! aha. Bilis na, sunduin nio na ako please!
Shan: Bruha ka! Pag walang lumapit na lalake sakin mamaya babatukan kita! Sige na, magbibihis na ako.
Janine: Thank u sis! Big Grin bye.



8:00 am
In front of school.

Shan: Namiss ko ata school.
Janine: Ikaw? namiss mu school? may lagnat ka ata sha!
Shan: Aha. Ewan ko ba, sana naman may pogi sa clase namin.
Janine: Yun naman lagi ang nasa isip mu! Nasan na kaya c Joy?
Shan: Ayun oh!
Janine: Ayun nga, puntahan natin.

Shan: JOOY!
Joy: Janine, Shan! Anu musta?
Shan: Ok lng mejo puyat.
Joy: bakit naman?
Janine: nakipagdate nanaman ata ehh
Joy: aha! wow naman. Ndi talaga nawawalan ah.
Shan: Ako pa!
Janine: Anu joy, anung section mu?
Joy: Section H, ikaw ba?
Janine: B
Shan: Ako D! Pakilala nio sakin ung mga gwapo niong classmates ah!
Janine: Hayayay! Ndi n tumigil c Shan
Joy: Ayan pa!
Shan: Sige, punta na ako s clase, excited na ako!
Janine & Joy: Ok! See you later. bye.

JANiNE's CLASS:
Janine: Best! Nice seeing you again!
Matt: Best! (hug)
Janine: Musta kna?
Matt: Ok lng! Ang dami kong ikkwento sayo! Dami kong nakilala this summer. Dito tayo, tabi tayo.
Janine: Sige, maya mu na ikwento, baka pumasok n ang teacher.
Teacher: (in italian) Hello class. Hmmm. May absent ata, 1st day of school pa naman! Cnu ba...

May pumasok sa class

Jay: Sorry I'm late.
Teacher: You're new?
Jay: Yes, sorry.. Malayo po bahay ko.
Teacher: Ok, pero hindi ko gusto ung mga dumadating na late ok? Take your sit.

Umupo si Jay sa tabi ng desk nina Matt.

Matt: ehem..! Pogi ano?
Janine: huh? ndi no! pangit pangit oh!



RECESS

Matt: Best, baba lang ako, puntahan ko c bro.
Janine: Oh cge, dto lang ako.

Nakita ni Janine na walang kausap si Jay at lumapit sya sakanya

Janine: Hey
Jay: Ciao (hi)
Janine: hmm.. I'm Janine, 16.
Jay: I'm Jay, 16 din.
Janine: I've never seen you before.
Jay: I lived in Rome, ngaun lang ako nag transfer dito sa milan
Janine: ah, nice thing..so how's rome?
Jay: hindi ka pa nkakapunta dun?
Janine: Hindi pa eh!
Jay: ahhh. maganda dun..

At nag kwentuhan sila till the end of recess.

After school:
Shan: Janiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii! (Niyakap si jani)
Janine: Aray naman! Anung ngyari?
Shan: I'm so saya saya! May nakita akong pogi! SOBRANG POGi! Ewan ko lang kng sang clase yun!
Jay: hey Jani!
Janine: Jay!
Jay: San ka nakatira?
Janine: Sa Sesto fiorentino..kaw ba?
Jay: Huh!? dun din ako!
Janine: aha wow!
Jay: pwede ba makisabay?
Janine: why not!
Shan: ehem ehem!!!
Janine: Ay, eto nga pala si shan, one of my closest friends. napakakulit nia.
Jay: Hi, I'm Jae
Shan: YES, i know you..
Jay: you know me?
Shan: er..nice knowing you pala! Jani pwede muna tyo mg usap sandali?
Janine: ahm, kng ok lng kay Jay
Jay: Sure

Lumayo si Janine at Sha

Janine: Anu meron?
Shan: Sya un!
Janine: anung sya un?
Shan: SYA UN! sya ung gwapong sinasabi ko sayo! pano mu nakilala?
Janine: Classmate ko un!
Shan: ooohhh. buti kpa! huhu. Sige sayo nalang sya huh!
Janine: ahah! what?!
Shan: oh dali dali hinihintay kna nya!
Janine: uu na, see you tomorrow. sunduin nio ulit ako please ah!
Shan: UU basta kwento mu skn anu ngyari snyo!
Janine: maloka ka talaga!

On the way home
Ang ganda nya..
pogi dw, ndi naman!
Jay: gusto mu ihatid kita sa bahay nyo?
Janine: no, its okay! baka malate ka pa ng dating sa bahay nyo.. San na ba bahay nio?
Jay: Yun oh.
Janine: anu?! aha!
Jay: bakit ka tumatawa?
Janine: E yun ung bahay namin, yung katabi ng bahay nio!
Jay: Ah. what a coincidence!
Janine: oo nga ehh.
Jay: hindi na pala kita kelngan ihatid eh.
Janine: oh eto na tayo, salamat ah!
Jay: salamat din sayo..

Pumasok sila sa bahay nila.

Hmm.. ok, i admit, cute sya. mabaet din, mejo may pgkamayabang nga lng!





I'll post part 2 soon! Smile

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10-06-2009, 04:03 AM
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PART 2

Nung umaga..

phone ringing

Janine: hello?
Shan: sis!
Janine: sis, nsan na kayo?
Shan: hindi ka namin masusundo sis. nasira car namin..baka nga malate ako o baka hindi na ako pumasok
Janine: ayy.. im sorry for your car. Mejo maaga pa naman, makakaabot cguro ako.
Shan: uu nga, kaya nga tinawagan na agad kita. Sayang naman kng hindi mu makikita c Jay
Janine: oh, jay ka nanaman jan! hindi ko pa nga sya kilala eh
Shan: eh tingan mu naman, ang baet, gwapo pa!
Janine: hindi sya gwapo sis, mag salamin kna! sige magbibihis na ako, mag mamadali ako. text ka nalang kung makakapunta ka sa school later ok!
Shan: Sure sis. ingat. bye.

Anu ba yan, sana wag ako malate.. Lagot ako sa teacher namin.

Pagkatapos niang mag bihis at mg breakfast, lumabas c Janine ng bahay at...

Jay: Morning.
Janine: (nagulat) Jay! Aga mu ah
Jay: Sabay tayo?
Janine: Sure, mejo late na nga tayo eh.
Jay: hindi pa tayo late, tayo na.
Janine: ok!

[color]what a good surprise naman this morning.[/color]

School
Mark: bro, tingan mu c Janine may boyfriend na!
Matt: anu?
Mark: Tingan mu oh!
nakita ni matt c Janine at Jay
Matt: Bago namin classmate un! Kinakaibigan nia lng cguro, alam mu naman c Janine..friendly.
Mark: Oo e ung c Jay hindi mu naman kilala.
Matt: Hayaan mu! may tiwala naman ako kay Janine.
Mark: bahala ka.
Matt: baka naman selos ka?
Mark: anu ka ba! Tayo na nga!
Matt: puntahan ko lng c janine
Mark: oh sige
Matt: sumama kna sakin.
Mark: Hindi naman kami close nun.
Matt: Friendly nga sya bro! Tayo na! (hinila c mark at pumunta sila kay janine at jay)

Janine: Best!
Matt: morning best. anu musta? ciao jay!
Jay: ciao.
Matt: eto bro ko, c mark..
Mark: nice meeting you
Jay: same here.
Matt: si shan?
Janine: Eto, katetext nia lng, hindi dw sya mkakapunta, nasira car nila.
Matt: ahhh.
Joy: Hey guys!
Janine: joy ko!
(napatingin si joy kay jay)
Joy: Ehmm. who is he?
Janine: new classmate namin, c jay.
Joy: oh wow! i mean, buti pa kayo may bagong classmate, kami wala. Nreceive mu txt ni shan?
Janine: uu
Joy: haha. ndi sya makakahanap ng gwapo today!
Janine: oo nga ehh.. aha. maloka talaga yun eh.
Matt: Best, jay, pasok na tyo sa class baka mapagalitan pa tayo.
Janine: Ok, see you all later guys! Tayo Jay.
Matt: best, hindi ko na nkwento sayo ung sasabihin ko sana sayo kahapon
Janine: uu nga eh, anu ba yun?
Matt: May nameet ako, grabe, ang cute nia.
Janine: naging kayo?
Matt: hindi naman! MU lng!
Janine: MU? Magulong Usapan? aha.
Matt: uu mejo magulo nga! aha. eh ikaw jay may gf kna?
Jay: Hindi, i'm not searching. ehe
Janine: wow naman, kaw lng ata yung guy dito n hindi nag hahanap eh!
Matt: oo nga ehh. ahaha. ung iba dito pumapasok lng para makipgflirt. kaya masanay kna.
Janine: wag mu ngang turuan c jay!
Matt: abah, hindi ko naman tinuturuan

After school
Nagsabay ulit c Jay at Janine papuntang bahay...

Jay: May gagawin ka ba mamaya?
Janine: wala naman. bakit?
Jay: hmm. gusto mu kain tayo ngaun sa labas?
[color]a date?![/color]
Janine: ahmmm.. wala akong dalang pera eh
Jay: Aha! anu ka ba, ako magbabayad
Janine: nakakahiya kaya!
Jay: dali na! minsan minsan lang naman eh
Janine: sige na nga! san tayo kakain?
Jay: ok lng kng s mcdo?
Janine: Sure!

At Mcdo:

Jay: Can u tell me something about you?
Janine: about me? for example?
Jay: kahit anu, for example.. alam mu na that i'm single.. ikaw ba?
Janine: Yea, super single.
Jay: Wala kang crush?
Janine: Hmmm. Wala.
Jay: sus, imposible
Janine: wala nga promise. ikaw ba?
Jay: wala din.
Janine: gaya gaya ka naman eh.
Jay: eh totoo naman ung akin.
Janine: ok. if you say so.. Anu pa gusto mung malaman?
Jay: kahit anu, kwento ka.
Janine: hmm. wala akong kapatid, i live with my mum. naghiwalay cla ni dady last year.
Jay: ah. sorry.
Janine: ok lng. ngyari na.
Jay: buti hindi ka nafifeel alone?
Janine: hmm. minsan lang pero i hang out with my friends nalang para hindi ko mafeel loneliness.
Jay: eh bakit wala kang bf? imposible na walang nagkakagusto syo
Janine: I want to be sure na kc, ang gusto ko pag nagkbf ako, sya na talaga, ung hindi ako iiwan.. iniwan na kc ako ng dady ko.. takot akong iwan ulit ako.
Jay: May naging bf ka?
Janine: kinda.. but i wasn't completely in love. bata pa ako nun, 13 years old.
Jay: wow.
Janine: ayun, pinagsisisihan ko nga ehh. ikaw?
Jay: May naging gf ako, we've been together for 1year.
Janine: serious ka sakanya?
Jay: uu naman but she didn't really love me, laro lng ata sakanya.
Janine: sad.
Jay: uu nga eh. at dahil dun parang ayoko na muna ulit mainlove.
Janine: wow, we have a lot in common pala.
Jay: yea.
Janine: wag kang mg alala, past na yun diba, let's look forward naman ngaun!
Jay: yung nga ang tintry ko.. Hatid na kita sa bahay, late na.
Janine: oh sige..

Sa harap ng kanilang bahay..

Janine: salamat sa food at sa kwentuhan jay! bukas ulit. night
Jay: ahm.. jani?
Janine: yup?
Jay: Thank you for listening to me..
Janine: wala yun! Im always here, lapit lng sa bahay nyo kaya if you need comfort just knock knock ok? aha.
Jay: aha. Salamat talaga.

Matutulog na si Janine, biglang nag ring ang cp nia..

Hmm.. may text!
From: Anonymous
I wish we could talk more next time..
i think i'm falling for you.

[color]Gosh! Private message. sino kaya to! Si Jay cguro.. he's falling for me? ang sweet nia naman.... Anu ba tong sinasabi ko! Hindi pa kami masyadong magkakilala tapos falling agad sya? anu kaya un! Pero...ewan. pano nia nalaman number ko? Hay, sino kaya to...[/color]

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03-20-2010, 05:40 PM
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hello dear author,,

wers next poh?

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