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he keeps hunting me -- another work of mine.
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11-29-2006, 02:26 PM
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he keeps hunting me -- another work of mine.
Here's another composition of mine. I made this yesterday, around 10:35 am. Please do leave a comment. Criticisms and compliments are much appreciated. Mwah.
He Keeps Hunting Me -- Shattered Soul *that's my pseudonym* He keeps hunting me in my dreams, living in my realms, fighting with his team, voice ringing in my ears. I tried to move on, I tried to let go But he keeps fighting like one of my foes, Prickling me with his thorns, Stopping me from achieving all my goals. Whenever we're together, He always gives me chills, Right is all thar I feel, All my wounds had been healed. Every moment we've shared, All the I love you's we have said, All the kiss and hugs he'd given, Everything, I just can't forget. I've tried to escape from the chain he'd made And close each open gate. And then I find myself in solitude, And be comfortable for a moment. Time had passed, time had came And I felt like I couldn't feel the pain But suddenly I have known and realize, I can't still let him go... Because he' hunting me.. In my dreams. Hope you liked it! Please do comment on a fourteen-year-old gal's work. Hihi. |
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